On a Dark night to kids made a robot for a school project but on a night a lightning touched the Robot and in the morning the Robot was a alive the kids left there robot on the deck and the robot was gone they saw it was in the kitchen but they were happy and they were crazy jumping around the kitchen then the robot got naughty more naughty everyday until one day the kids parents said we are going on a holiday and they left the robot home guess what happened the Robot ruined the house the parents said we're going to stay on the holiday and the ead
Hi Saraia, I like how you remembered all the parts of the story to retell it. Think about using full stops to separate your sentences and use a capital letter to show the beginning of a new sentence.
ReplyDeleteHi saraia i like your drawing and i like how you remember to put puncheon in your story from Klaudia .
ReplyDelete